He picked out this sentence in a New Yorker casual of mine: 'After dinner, the men moved into the living room,' and he wanted to know why I, or the editors, had put in the comma. I could explain that one all night. I wrote back that this particular comma was Ross's way of giving the men time to push back their chairs and stand up.
About this quote
- What does it mean?
- A specific comma in writing can serve to slow down the narrative, giving characters time for physical action.
- In plain terms
- Punctuation can be used to show that time passed during a scene.
- What can you take from it?
- Punctuation can control pacing and imply action.
Where it applies
Putting it to work
Questions to consider
- How does punctuation affect your reading?
- Is detail always useful?
Another view
Not all readers care about such subtle textual choices.
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