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What does it mean?
A specific comma in writing can serve to slow down the narrative, giving characters time for physical action.
In plain terms
Punctuation can be used to show that time passed during a scene.
What can you take from it?
Punctuation can control pacing and imply action.

Where it applies

  • editing
  • teaching writing
  • criticism

Putting it to work

  • use punctuation for pacing
  • detail narrative rhythm

Questions to consider

  • How does punctuation affect your reading?
  • Is detail always useful?

Another view

Not all readers care about such subtle textual choices.

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