'..for the dead fish was striped like a cat and the sky was striped like the fish and the conch was whorled like an ear and the beach was ribbed like a dog's mouth and the movables in the surf splintered and crashed like the walls of Jericho.'
About this quote
- What does it mean?
- A vivid description using similes to link natural elements to familiar textures and sounds.
- In plain terms
- Nature and objects are described using comparisons to animals and structures.
- What can you take from it?
- Use sensory comparisons to make descriptions vivid.
Where it applies
Putting it to work
Questions to consider
- How do comparisons shape perception?
- What is the effect of dense imagery?
Another view
Excessive similes can overwhelm the main subject.
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