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What does it mean?
Writing that glows softly is better than overly bright transparency.
In plain terms
Clear but subtle writing works better than stark clarity.
What can you take from it?
Aim for evocative clarity not just plain facts.

Where it applies

  • narrative
  • essays
  • reporting

Putting it to work

  • soften tone
  • use imagery

Questions to consider

  • What is better writing?
  • Does style help meaning?

Another view

Transparency can still be best.

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