When all things are equal, translucence in writing is more effective than transparency, just as glow is more revealing than glare.
About this quote
- What does it mean?
- Writing that glows softly is better than overly bright transparency.
- In plain terms
- Clear but subtle writing works better than stark clarity.
- What can you take from it?
- Aim for evocative clarity not just plain facts.
Where it applies
Putting it to work
Questions to consider
- What is better writing?
- Does style help meaning?
Another view
Transparency can still be best.
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