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Some days hang over Manhatten like a huge pair of unseen pincers, slowly squeezing the city until you can hardly breathe. A low growl of thunder echoed up the cavern of Fith Avenue and I looked up to where the sky started at the seventy-first floor of the Empire State Building. I could smell the rain. It was the kind that hung above the orderly piles of concrete until it was soaked with dust and debris and when it came down it wasn't rain at all but the sweat of the city.

Mickey Spillane#36

UrbanAtmosphereCityMoodNatureOppressionWeather

About this quote

What does it mean?
The city is described as a living, oppressive entity where weather and architecture merge into a suffocating atmosphere.
In plain terms
Manhattan feels like a living city under an oppressive sky.
What can you take from it?
Urban environments can feel like living, hostile organisms.

Where it applies

  • urban setting
  • describing place
  • environmental writing

Putting it to work

  • setting description
  • mood creation
  • urban planning

Questions to consider

  • How does a city feel alive?
  • What does the weather say about mood?

Another view

Anthropomorphizing the city may feel melodramatic to some readers.

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