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What does it mean?
Chandler uses a vivid simile to show how obvious and out of place someone looks in a crowd.
In plain terms
He looked very obvious and strange in that quiet street.
What can you take from it?
Unusual similes can highlight how conspicuous someone is.

Where it applies

  • character description
  • setting scene
  • writing

Putting it to work

  • create vivid images
  • show contrast

Questions to consider

  • How to describe standing out?
  • What makes a simile memorable?

Another view

The image is so specific it might distract from the scene.

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