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An immensely tall, angular figure ... His gown hung round him in long folds like the wings of a bat, and his wig was perched slightly askew over a lantern jawed face with a blue chin, soulful spaniel-brown eyes and a turned-down mouth like a slit. But for his garb, you would have said that he was a dyspeptic undertaker in a town where nobody ever died.

Gerald Durrell#8

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About this quote

What does it mean?
A vivid physical description suggests a man who looks grim and out of place, like an undertaker in a town without death.
In plain terms
He looks like a sad undertaker even though nobody there has died.
What can you take from it?
Clothing and posture can create a misleading impression of a person's role.

Where it applies

  • character sketch
  • humorous observation
  • literary description

Putting it to work

  • writing character intros
  • creating visual contrast

Questions to consider

  • How does appearance shape identity?
  • What makes a figure memorable?

Another view

It relies heavily on visual metaphors that may not translate well.

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