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I have one word to say upon the subject of profound writers, who are grown very numerous of late; and I know very well the judicious world is resolved to list me in that number. I conceive therefore, as to the business of being profound, that it is with writers as with wells - a person with good eyes may see to the bottom of the deepest, provided any water be there: and often when there is nothing in the world at the bottom besides dryness and dirt, though it be but a yard and a-half under-ground, it shall pass, however, for wondrous deep upon no wiser reason than because it is wondrous dark.

Jonathan Swift#3

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About this quote

What does it mean?
Swift mocks writers who try to seem profound by being obscure, comparing them to empty wells that look deep because they are dark.
In plain terms
Writers who hide their lack of ideas in darkness pretend to be deep.
What can you take from it?
Clarity is better than false profundity.

Where it applies

  • critiquing bad writing
  • valuing clarity

Putting it to work

  • writing advice
  • literary critique

Questions to consider

  • Is clarity always best?
  • When does depth require obscurity?

Another view

Some complex ideas require careful explanation.

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