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What does it mean?
Jarrell critiques overly ornate writing, comparing it to expensive monuments that are warm but ultimately lifeless.
In plain terms
Flowery prose can be beautiful but empty, like expensive graves.
What can you take from it?
Avoid over-decoration in writing; simplicity often resonates more.

Where it applies

  • literary criticism
  • editorial feedback
  • creative writing

Putting it to work

  • edit for clarity
  • avoid excessive adjectives
  • prioritize substance

Questions to consider

  • Is beauty in writing worth the cost of clarity?
  • When does style become style?

Another view

Some readers prefer rich, descriptive language over stark simplicity.

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