Substitute 'damn' every time you're inclined to write 'very'; your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be.
About this quote
- What does it mean?
- Replace the adverb 'very' with 'damn' to avoid over‑emphasis; the editor will remove it and the prose will be balanced.
- In plain terms
- Swap 'very' for 'damn' and let the editor cut it for clearer writing.
- What can you take from it?
- Use stronger language sparingly and rely on editing for balance.
Where it applies
Putting it to work
Questions to consider
- Does removing filler improve clarity?
- When is strong language appropriate?
Another view
The advice assumes an editor will always remove the word, which may not happen.
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