By the way, would you convey my compliments to the purist who reads your proofs and tell him or her that I write in a sort of broken-down patois which is something like the way a Swiss-waiter talks, and that when I split an infinitive, God damn it, I split it so it will remain split, and when I interrupt the velvety smoothness of my more or less literate syntax with a few sudden words of barroom vernacular, this is done with the eyes wide open and the mind relaxed and attentive. The method may not be perfect, but it is all I have.
About this quote
- What does it mean?
- Chandler defends his informal writing style and deliberate rule-breaking as authentic to his voice.
- In plain terms
- He admits he breaks grammar rules on purpose to sound real.
- What can you take from it?
- Authenticity in writing matters more than perfect grammar.
Where it applies
Putting it to work
Questions to consider
- Does breaking rules improve writing?
- What makes a voice unique?
Another view
It might encourage beginners to ignore rules entirely without justification.
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